Gazing out to sea
it stands in mighty majesty.
While suns rise and set
in rain or snow, dry or wet.
Forever it stands, a symbol of hope and love
as majestic and innocent as a morning dove.
Why does it stand so strong and so tall?
It stands as a reminder, of God to all.
A contest entry
- Catholic Picture Inspiration by Frodofan.
575 points, ended February 2, 2009, 9 entries
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The two-stanzas really work well for this poem. I particularly like how your poem leads up to this question in line 7, "Why does it stand so strong and so tall? And then answers it in the final line.
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interesting poem...beautifully written!
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This is very good and beautiful!
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Nice write
very nice poems as well and thank you for your sweet comment and I'm glad I took the time to read your profile its good to know I can count on someone to be there when I need a friend and a helping hand.
blessings!
Sharon L.
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Okay....first I must say there is no such thing as a bad poet. Not to me anyway. And this is not a bad write[I don't believe in those either.] I think this is a terrific write and that you should continue writing!! Great job!!
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Nice. A little simple, but nice. I think it could be elaborted on, though it is still a nice compact poem as it is.
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Yes who can perceive the ocean and not be aware of God's presence? Your third staza is excellent! It's all excellent.
Peace Georgia
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This is telling of the beauty lwft for us to be reminded
by another. God can be every where...mac
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