The world is in peril
We need to conform
Look inside
A contest entry
- 11 words by Melissa Gayle.
600 points, ended January 20, 26 entries
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I am not so sure conforming is what we need.
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Few words, strong message, void puncts., no rhyme, all true of my favorite type poetry!!!! I think this one is great!!!!! Best wishes in this contest!!!!!
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to jacbgd2
Thanks it doesn't take to much to convey thoughts even in so little words.
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We need to conform? Interesting thought. Who knows, maybe conformity is what we need.
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Judith Chandler
Thanks Judith, I don't really think it is the times, but the people, and what they do and think, and the government of course. We can't do everything but even one person can always make a difference someplace in the world
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