Rape me, take me, use me,
keep whatevers left to find,
i dont care anymore, cant care anymore,
just this empty shell of what used to be a girl.
i love you i love you i love you,
all those words for sex,
but now you have me confused,
what is love? i dont believe in its existance.
Close my eyes, spread my legs,
all to keep from being lonely,
even the good guys turn in the end.
so go ahead have your fun
i dont want ownership of this disgusting body anymore.
let me go let me fade,
im aready among the walking dead.
Author notes
im learning im not a person
im not worth being a person
they love me for sex
and nothing else
Please tell me what you think
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I know the part of your heart from where you speak. But please remember, you can overcome anything with the proper perspective. Twist these guys (or guy) into the musty little memory it should be and put it in the back of your heart and mind. Soon enough, the rats will eat it.
The write was well done and you did a great job with feeling coming through. I hate the reason for the write but enjoyed the reading.
Sharon
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im trying to do that now, just get rid of the thoughts. thank you so much for commenting and for the advice. i really appreciate it.
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Boys grow to men. Some boys aren't like this. They are driven by sex, but some are shy and afraid of girls.
Some men are decent and good. I'm married to one. My son is 17, shy, and has never had a girlfriend. He's cute but not perfect.
The teen years are so hard. Either a girl is ugly and not worth a second look, or she's pretty and taken advantage of.
Maybe teenage boys should be avoided by girls. Sounds like most boys deserve to be snubbed.
There's nothing wrong with you. It's the ones who mistreat you who are sick.
Good poem, by the way. check spelling on disgusting, line 13.
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its not just boys that are like this in my life, its mostly men. it scares me to think that i'm going to have to be stuck with one of them.
you must have done something right with your son, i wish there were nice sweet boys like that around here. itd be a nice change
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Do me a favor and do a spell check and grammar check, that is one of those things that really bothers me. Otherwise the write was well done and thank you for entering
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I'm very disturbed by this poem. It's beautiful in the way that you captured the words, but I am irritated that men have decided to do this to yet another young lady.
This just recently happened with me. He told me that he would make me change my mind on relationships, he did, but for the worst. After sleeping together a couple times he dumps me and won't talk to me at all.
So don't feel like you're alone, if you need anyone to talk to, just let me know.
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thank you so much. im just so tired of being hurt and seeing my friends get hurt. im so just ready to give up on finding that one guy that wont use me you know? i hate how they make you feel like your no longer a person, your just a body for their own use.
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Yeah I totally understand how you feel. I finally did give up because I'm tired of being the person getting hurt in the end. I date around but I don't look for anything serious anymore because it just seems pointless to get attached to someone who only ends up hurting you in the end anyway.
*hugs* I hope that things change for you. You deserve so much better than you've been treated.
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ya i know. im not really seeing the point anymore. blah! thank you so much
same goes for you, im always here!
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