Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

An Old Woman Who Lived In A Shoe

Missing image

Autumn blazed from her eyes
diamonds tapped on soles of her shoes
red hair medusa flame, half-white

and she danced
holding our hands
until fingers bent back and snapped
with the looseness of it
and we danced

she was cold water after a desert walk about
a tear in blankets just after one feels warm
a back pack over a six hundred dollar suit
but she danced  to Paul Simon

and her partner was black
as blue-blood
African as dark settling over Serengeti
where poachers lurk
to split the pack

and they had danced

like sun and shadow playing
across a planked floor

we were splintered rainbows
a prism reflected on skin
that made us all the same

we were Africa
for a few undulating moments
hanging on her highest trill
following her imprint of diamonds



Author notes

I spent a few days with the lady who Paul Simon wrote his "Diamonds On The Soles Of Her Shoes" song for. She had escaped from South Africa with her African husband. It did not matter that she owned a top-end chain of stores or that he was a doctor. She was expecting a biracial child. It was leave or die.

Monica's website: http://www.shosholoza.ca/clients.html

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Thor-201
    January 25
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for your entry, best of luck in the contest


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 19

    Edit | Reply
    "like sun and shadow playing
    across a planked floor

    we were splintered rainbows
    a prism reflected on skin"

    Great metaphor in this amazing write...You always make people feel so very special in your dedication poems...Sigh....

    I just love everything you pen

    Lynda