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I Am Thicker Than Water

Am I to bend to expectation?
And bow to borrowed banalities?

Not me.
I have substance greater than impressions,
And soul more solid than donated ideals.

I am thicker than water.















Author notes

I was feeling... philosophical. It was one of those poems where the first line predestines the rest.

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  • You said so much with so little words, and it just drawls you in from start to end.
    Great job, and thank you for giving me a chance to read this.


  • trekkergirl
    March 29

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    nice short in statue but it really says a whole lot. Very deep and an interesting read. I enjoyed it. This contest has really brought about a lot of good writings to it.

  • Nicole Hanna
    January 29
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  • funpum
    January 26
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    Nice. Exactly how and who I am I hope!