There was a little spider on a waterspout.
She was spinning her web weaving it in and out.
Up and down she went fast as she could go.
Back and forth she went never looking down below.
Her web got bigger and BIGGER till at last she had it made.
Then she found a little spot and there her eggs she laid.
What did you think
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Thank you ElectricBloom
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aww, this is so cute ^.^
i actually like spiders, and i can imagine all of this happening. it's put a huge smile on my face. excellent description and imagery throughout - i could read this over and over. the rhyme is good and really helps with the flow of the piece.
well done, i truly enjoyed reading this!
ElectricBloom
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