The sunset lay on the moon
over the dark green hill
It’s never up too late, never up too soon
It makes me sit on the balcony and lie
Looking at the sunset lay on the moon
Such wild colours in my eye
From the beautiful feeling in the sky
If I had a wish
I’d wish for many things
But most of all to swim in the sunset
With my bright yellow wings
I could imagine the sky
Live forever and never die
Even when us humans are not around,
The sunset will be laying on the moon,
It will be standing there,
Never up too late and never up to soon.
Author notes
prompt-sunset
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A wonderful piece here I enjoyed reading! Thank you for the entry and good luck hon
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Never up too late and never up to soon.
I like that ... very poetic line you have penned. It wants to stay in my mind. thank you for entering -
Wonderfully penned. The imagery was incredible. Your vision delightful. I too would love to swim in a sunset....as close as I will get is watching and dreaming and you captured it well within this piece. May your ink never stop flowing, your words never silenced for you have been blessed with a talent. Will be reading more of your work. Best of luck in the contest.
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Beautiful!You have a record to do it!
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This is a lovely poem, full of bright imagery.. I too, would love to 'swim in the sunset'.. Thank you for a wonderful poem.. Never stop writing.
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