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Cry for Help

Every night I dream it
The heartache that stays here
It plays behind my blank eyelids
And clouds my mind with fear

Mental injury upon me
The thoughts I must withdraw
My down and ruined spirit here-
Effects of your broken law

I'm craving to be happy
Praying blindly to above
Can't I come across someone,
Someone to show me love?

I ask my mom for mercy
I wish she were more proud
It seems that she just doesn't care-
Her thoughts, she spoke aloud

She says I need to stop this
I'm butchering my life
She says I'm blowing this thing up;
I cause myself this strife

I just need a friend now
Someone who really cares
Maybe they can offer wisdom
And happy thoughts to share

Author notes

this is pretty much true, and I tried to use as many words as I could (but I think I only had to use ten...oh well haha)

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  • serenity silvermoon
    January 19

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    heartache
    injury
    wisdom
    withdraw
    worship
    verbal
    vision
    stay
    spirit
    proud
    mercy
    lonesome
    happy
    craving
    couple
    above
    across
    blank
    blind
    butcher
    below
    behind

    use at least 10