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Growing up

That beautiful face,
That starry smile
It's not in the same place
As when I was a child;
Dreaming of bugs
In mother's loving hugs.

Your fruity dark hair
And your baby soft skin
Is no longer in my clutches.
It's hard to go on
When I was never able to say,
How much I love you.

Your pure winter eyes
And the kisses you'd give me
No longer in sight
Nor my endless glee.

Even If I never told you
You always knew
The secrets I held
And How much I love you

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just some thoughts I had ...

anything I should add or take out? elaborate or simplify?

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