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Mechanized

Day to day,
they fall behind,
the masses overwhelming.
They toil
in heads filled with
illusions of grandeur.

Better than all the rest,
they fight on each day;
unknowing,
uncaring,
of the lives they
affect.

A dirty orphan on the street,
a broken old war veteran;
do they wipe her tears away,
or listen to the reason
behind his?

Moving much too fast
to give a damn,
this world is carried
on soft spines-
Too mechanical to feel;
too blind to know the
difference.

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  • Meroza
    January 24, 2009
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    Powerful, good use of words