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milo.


hot milo
settles somewhere deep
in my soul

warming
every little thought that got
tangled in my bed sheets.

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mornings
draw sheep between my closed eyelids.



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lousy and random.

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  • Walk-Free
    January 21
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    great job (:


  • divebar
    January 20

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    i like the middle, but yeah this is eh. thoughts getting tangled in bedsheets, though. i know the feeling. you should dwell a little more on that.