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trying too hard.


.

i hear you sigh,
and i drag moments, dreams, memories
from your closed lips

trying to soothe the creases
in our brittle laughs.


i want to mold you.

but i’d rather watch you
stuggle,

than know creases don’t mend
with words.

.

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ugh.

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  • divebar
    January 20

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    *struggle

    id like it without the last 2 lines.
    brittle laughs was clever.
    my brains not functioning thats all ive got.