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Love Sings

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Love Sings

 

Paint the sky with the music in your eyes,
take the time and let your divine light shine.
I hear your cries inside whispering pleas,

you’ll forever be an angel of mine.

 

If my song goes away one rainy day,

never worry for I’ll always return

For the sun brings us together as one,

as our flames of desire brightly burn.

 

Love is destiny in reality,

my guitar strums softly afar for you

I will always give, it’s the way I live,

sweet beautiful angel, my baby blue.

 

I adore your heart for tender romance,

May the world be a stage were lover’s dance.

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A must read: http://allpoetry.com/Sharon%20Corr

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  • penman gold member
    January 25
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    Excellent

    Such an amazing write. As always so creative. Thank you for sharing.


  • Lonely
    January 20

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    Wow, thats really another beautiful piece of poetry.. You are very much into the romantic stuff arent you? Getting spioled haan? lol! Keep on writing and sharing these wonderful poems Tim, they are like a fresh breeze! And if you can bring back the sun, Please Tim, I need some clouds here, they just went away and I want my rain back can you do that for me? lol

    Love you lotssssssssss

    Lonely


    • poeticweaver gold member
      January 21
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      Thanks My Friend!

      This was a lovely collab, fun and flows with love.
      You need a dark one hey, ok, one just for you coming soon.


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 19

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    What a beautiful collab!
    Two voices blended in perfect harmony!
    I love this, Bro!
    Beautifully penned you two!!!

    Lynda


    • poeticweaver gold member
      January 21
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      -hugs-

      Thanks my darling sis, and friend.
      Your words are always welcome.
      Thanks from the two of us.


  • Fr33BirdFaLLin
    January 19
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    *claps*


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    January 19

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    ~Awesome and Beautiful~

    Dearest Timothy, Blessings and deep sincere love for this stunning song of Us as We, in the sea of lovers’ dreams.
    I love you; forever this dance will be our truth.
    Lets keep on penning, as we dance the shores of heaven.
    You're my symphony; you’re my love light in eternity,
    You’re the one that lets us shine as the sunlit sea!

    All my love in our divine and tender melodies, and dreams that will forever last, for this kiss is our future past!

    All My Love, Sharon

    • poeticweaver gold member
      January 21
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      Thanks Sharon

      It's a pleasure penning with you, we could pen a thousand pieces together without breaking a sweat. lol. We just click like that! Thanks for gracing me with your heart and soul. Much love, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    January 19

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    this is just lovely mushy you and your co writer did a very sweet move on the eyes this was a pleasure *rose


  • endless-lover silver member
    January 19

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    ok so i was going to copy my fave parts but the whole poem all in all was simply amazing, and it made me think of so many people great write dad this is so one of your best in my book fo'sur love lots..xoxox


    • poeticweaver gold member
      January 21
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      Thanks Daughter Dear!

      I always appreciate your visits.
      We both appreciate the wonderful comment!


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    January 19

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    my guitar strums softly afar for you
    I will always give, it’s the way I live,

    ahh Tim, I love the gentleness in this.
    you have such a nice and soothing singing voice

    another wonderful collabo
    you sure do inspire us to write


    FlyShy




  • Wandika gold member
    January 19
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    Nice Timothy

    You are getting more into form poetry than ever before.


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 19

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    my dearest brother your words shine along with your friends with brilliance. the write actually brought me to tears for some of the lines made me think of how strong, loving and precious our friendship is and the lines about the rainy day made me think of how we tend to be each others rainbow on the darkest of days. well done to both of you and many blessings always xxxx


    • poeticweaver gold member
      January 21
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      Thanks Sis!

      Much love sis star, you are so sweet.
      We appreciate the read, and your love.

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