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Simple Weeds Make You Smile

Yellow pop of color
spreading a smile
across the lawn

Dancing spin wheeled flowers
waiting to be picked
before the early dawn

Make a wish
with its seeds
it may come true

Gather up
for a vase
just for you

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  • written-in-ink
    January 24
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    mhm

    lovely way to pout it

    thank you


  • coloringmysenses
    January 19

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    I love how the first stanza just automatically draws the reader in with "pop." (It did for me, at least.) The simple rhyming scheme went unnoticed for me until I read through it again -- I really like that.
    Great write and good luck in the contest!