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I search your face
run my fingers threw your hair
listen to all your lies
then I just silently stare

Please tell me what you think

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  • Canadamomma
    January 19
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    A deeply sad take on the prompt beautifully written
    Best of luck


  • thegirlsafaultline.
    January 19
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    I love this(:
    Great job.
    Good luck in the contest(:


  • innocence jaded.xx
    January 19

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    wow. this pretty much says it all. i read this, and immediately had a flashback.
    this poem is me in a nutshell. so thank you (:
    ♥

  • ElectricBloom
    January 19

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    oooh, this is beautiul. i'm literally left in awe. i love the rhyme, the description and the gorgeous imagery. you've said such a lot in 20 words!

    i love this, i could read it over and over.

    best of luck in the contest you have entered.

    ElectricBloom

  • SmidyMilton
    January 19

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    Nice.. Kind of makes me wonder.. Just what is that person, the ones who stares at me everyday, thinking when they look at me?

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