Step with me
where wildflowers bloom
Let's get lost within your smile.
Count the petals if you love me.
Will you lay me down awhile?
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Your sentiment
is showing
behind those gentle eyes.
There's a thunder in your sway
The wind sings it in my sighs.
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Play me-
with your instrument
I like to make it hum
as the Earth moves to our laughter
bare skin feels the raindrops come.
~
and suddenly there's an audience
as stars sip love's sweet perfume
the shimmer of our silhouettes,
radiant;
this blushing flower in bloom.
♥♥
~
Author notes
70's ROCKED!
My favorite band was and is Led Zeppelin and this was inspired by their music....
TY for the invite! I had a blast
A contest entry
- Blast From The Past by Celticmoon.
1200 points, ended February 24, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Your words offer a feathered blanket of warmth that comes in so simple a form as a flower fielded dance to last a lifetime of memories and then some. Alluring in the midst of sensuality as always. Good luck and thank you for entering!
Blessings
Bel
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well done sweet lady, a beautiful dance in a field of flowers long forgotten.
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Very warm and windlsome whisp is feather filling sky with dance...lovely angel-poet
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Lynda
Your words make loving good. And all the stars that ever were smile at the wondrous event.
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such a sweet, soft and light poem full of beauty and sentimentality, providing quite a rather lovely contrast to the powerful music Led zeppelin are known for. very well done cuz and best wishes for the contest.
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