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Tabby

 green
eyes glow,
staring down,
watching me type
fluff.

my
poem
randomly
inspired by
cat;

does
he know
his purring
is poetic
muse?
 
 
 
 
 

Author notes

A random lanturne string written for a workshop in the group Forms Forms and More Forms. I love my cats.

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  • Purrsanthema
    February 13
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    It worked for me!

  • Purrsanthema
    February 13
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    Yes the poem worked for me.

  • Purrsanthema
    February 13
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    You say cats plural. How many?


    • iamlost gold member
      February 13
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      I have nine. Thankfully, this is legal where I live, since they're all well taken care of. I'm already a crazy cat lady!

  • Purrsanthema
    February 13

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    Yes it worked for me. "Watching me type fluff" I hope you're just talking about what the cat thinks! I particularly like the first stanza. The others are good too but I particularly like the first part. I agree that their purr is a poetic muse. The fact that the last two parts didn't pack as much of a wallop did not detract from the whole.


  • Denerica
    January 19
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    Cute, our pets sure can inspire, or should I say assist. Nice write. Blessings.

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