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Perfection

Oh the sand between our toeses,
And chocolate ice cream on our noses;
Building castles with two giant grins,
Swimming side by side with dolphins in the sea.
Yes we'll be tan all year round;
And we won't hear the city sounds,
Only waves, crashing on the shore.
Don't worry about the cost of things
Cause everythings free and no ones poor!
Oh wouldn't that be grand?
Building castles in the sand,
Like we were sisters.

We'd never have to leave each other's sides.
No we'd never be unhappy
Swimming freely,
Singing sweetly on the ferris rides.
We'd always be together,
Needing no one but each other...
Needing nothing but the sweet sunshine,
Some old guitars
And wishing stars
That always granted wishes...
No matter how insane.

With sand beneath our feet
And salty water on the beach
We'd have it all;
A perfect life with no more worries,
Where we never have to hurry.
No, we never have to hurry
Cause all we have is time.
With our loved ones on the beach,
We'll never have to worry cause
We'll never have to leave them.
No, on our beach no one will ever die...
Time can fly, and pass us by,
But we'll all remain united
Till the end of time.

With the sand beneath our toes,
We'll live happily together, as you know.
And the stars you wish upon at night,
Will always be there for you,
The stars which only care for you will always shine...
They'll always glow.


Author notes

I hope you like your beach poem haha

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BEACH!

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  • written-in-ink
    January 24

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    i like it
    i think that you did a very good job with what it was that you were tying to say

    and i love the whole feeling that everything happened

    i loved it

    the first line caught me

    i love that word
    toeses
    hahaha

    thank you love


  • Umi Juvariel
    January 21

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    Lol, I liked the first line and 'toeses' That made me smile. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.


  • Angierie
    January 19
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    SWEETNESS!!!
    haha.