Within this sea of linen
your belly is
the horizon,
my shoreline,
it beckons
me.
© Oisin
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Linen does have its appeals, for certain. Bellies, too. 
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this is well written excellent details and descriptions
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wow that is a quick jump through my poems lol i hope you find one or two that you enjoy without the rush
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So softy perfect and dreamy. Passion in such few words is rare. You certainly captured it.
Az
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...and that is all you need to see. Lovely poetry!
~ Nicolette
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I like the idea, the gentle tone of this, the images - but for me, horizon and shoreline are diametrically opposed and the push/pull of that spoils the serenity of the poem.
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i like bellies.
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