Your stark white beauty is beyond compare
The snow covers the mountain everywhere
The water is cold but oh so blue
You captured my breath because you knew
I'd sit for hours to capture the scene
So breathtaking so serene
I don't want to leave this place
Take away this beauty or fall from your grace
God you created more then just a look
You've shown the true essence of what it took
Thank you for showing and giving us a clue
We wait here on earth to honor You
It's so sweet you showed such care
Catches me off gaurd and unaware
Beauty is everywhere you just have to see
What it's really about and what it's meant to be
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt-Nature by stavykm.
700 points, ended January 21, 19 entries
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ahhh the beauty of his creations. This is a lovely write. Your choice of words ... nice. reminds one to be grateful for the beauty that he surrounds us with...
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This is awesome!
Very beautiful, a natural flow of words, like an undisturbed waterfall....
One thing always amaze me about nature though: Currently we're in a broken sin filled world, nature also have to bear the brunt of man's original sin. Just think how much more beauty the new earth will have, as God intended it originally, "where the lamb and the lion lie side by side..."
Good poem, well done!!!!
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Excellent
You really wrote a beautiful poem here. I just loved it so much the whole thing. The rhyme is excellent put in one stanza you used clue twice. Try to find another word to rhyme with clue, probably did it on acident. I loved how you were so serene and grateful just taking in the breathtaking beauty of Gods creation. Very well done. Thank you for entering and best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Much Love,
Kelle Marie
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Magical
Some times rhyming couplets give the poem a childish almost half hearted feel.
That certainly is not the case here. There is so much faith hidden inside the emotions of this poem. Beutiful well done
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Visions
Visions and creations. Our heaven and our happiness as a cascade of beauty enlightens our hearts and souls. Wonderful poet.
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Nice flow, rhythm, rhyme and the truth, loved it all of course. There is a typo, gaurd-guard. Blessings.
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