Deserts echo unseen tears;
falling thunders of
righteous causes,
forgiveness fades away.
A contest entry
- 12 words by Melissa Gayle.
600 points, ended January 19, 2009, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A well-stated content
and a poem with a final line of solid truth. The silver deserved, but more so the one who wrote this poem. Frans
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Wow. I hesitated clicking on this one, for I feared the piece would incite vortex of heated feelings. Yet this piece has a steadfast resolution and a gentle indignation and that leads the reader to exactly where the poet wants them to be.
Stunning.
Marianne
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Sad sounds and sights. With just few words you gave the whole imagery.
Well done with this very sad topic
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Well done, poet!
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the last line is peaceful.
congrads on the silver.
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Its all so extremely sad, isn't it.
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Thank you Melissa-
short writings are a challenge for me... I also appreciate the chance to write with freedom to choose the topic...Thanks you for the honor...PK
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so sad to see on the news...
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we can only wish them peace and for the sounds of tears to fade away...
~ Nicolette
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tears, indeed
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Very well done good luck
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