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Best Way to Keep Warm On Cold Night

cold night
coupled close
front to back
warmed by
cloak of love

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12 words
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2433933

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  • Maxboy gold member
    January 19

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    A wonderful 12 words and the best way to keep warm.



  • Jornada
    January 19
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    Absolutely perfect!


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    January 19

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    Bundled!

    You aced this in 12 words. Nice imagery you brought to the reader here. Comfy! Lovey dovey. All the best in the Contest!

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 19
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    And it sure has been cold lately. A nice way to warm.


  • rbruce gold member
    January 19
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    Spot on, it works very well too.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 19
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    a wonderful poem good luckin the contest


  • Cup-a-Joe
    January 19
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    Better that a warm morning coal heater.
    Joe

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