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getting out of your skin

Missing image
barely in and barely out of the skin that i am in
want to hold and touch in every way that the
heart chooses.
making a smooth touch of shoulder-blade and making a
exit with your lips on my skin.

no play-time in order
trying to recover what was lost over the
years.

slipping in my little black dress and
calling it a night
when i am along.

passing the time away with a
bottle wine and a slow song playing
in the background.

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  • AnaelCathetelEcanus silver member
    March 3, 2009
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    Awesome write, Black eye. Truly enjoyed the imagery and words you have written.


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    March 1, 2009

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    Very great write. You give an excellent take on the prompt. I loved reading this. This is such a great write!


  • PureRomance
    February 27, 2009

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    This was an excellent poem. Congratulations on the trophy. Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to reading more from you as I get the extra time.


  • Angelflower
    January 22, 2009

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    this was a really interesting take on the prompt.. thank you very much for your entry! Best of luck in the contest.


    Angel