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Realm Beyond The Norm

To love, to hate, to celebrate

What is this word I spell?

A term from another place

I do not know it well!

 

A mystery beyond the norm

Of life's daily felt emotions

What can it be, he says

Junoon? I have a notion.

 

Passion for life,

For love, as a hunger

As you need your food,

Giving to another

Only for their good.

 

As two loves

In time become

More a part of each other

One cannot tell them apart

For each reflects the other

As does a mirror reflect

The image one sees........

 

 

 

You can tell, mystery man

What is most like your junoon..

I only share what I sense

 

 

Author notes

Pakistanian, term "junoon"....my nephew Ghani had asked me to participate in this contest...So, I in my own thoughts shared this poem..

A contest entry

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    February 5

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    Realm Beyond The Norm

    Theme 6.50
    Idea 6.60
    Emotions 6.50
    Feelings 6.50
    Words 6.50
    Background 7.00
    Title 7.00
    Passion 6.00
    Interest 6.50
    Showing the Junoon 6.00
    65.10
    ..................

    and Here, comes mystery man!

    With sll the Powers of Unknowns!
    With all the Emotions

    With The Two Angels.

    ~Death's Pain Angel~

    and

    ~An Angel Of Emotions~

    Even you had Specified the Junoon in such Little Expression, it was better, and pretty Amazing

    Love you Alottttttttttttt

    By
    The poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • Melba Solis-Z
    January 26
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    Loved it. a great write! Thanks for stopping my and commenting on mine my friend.

    Mel


  • afullmetalwar
    January 20
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    ...

    Just wonderful... i feel like some of the rhyming at the end of some of the lines were forced, i tip my hat to you, and i give you this rating,
    I will give a 5/5 for the poem, and 4/5 for the coloring. You get 5/5 for the message. And a 5/5 for the picture that the poem gives
    Grand total of 19/20