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Satin and Lace

Missing image

Tantalizing fruit
of innocence, forgotten ~

once lusciously divine,

now rots

in adolescent
rights of passage.

Virginal naivety,
a young woman's power,
is mocked...

Friends, music,
movies and television
urge youth

to purge themselves

of archaic "purity" dogma.

Satin and lace
now lay discarded
upon society's floor ~

trampled underfoot
by a generation
seeking only to please itself.

Vacant eyes wander,
aimlessly searching for

...something,
anything at all,

that can fill

(if only momentarily)

voids left unfulfilled
in childhood's end...

finding nothing.

 

 

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    March 4, 2009
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    very beautiful


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 21, 2009

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    A lot of truth in here! Many seek to fill that void in ways that only leave them emptier! Excellent take on the picture.


  • Endeavor gold member
    January 20, 2009

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    Excellent


    voids left unfulfilled
    in childhood's end...

    finding nothing.

    Great take on the immage
    I think we may be saying, the same thing

    Rick


  • maralisa silver member
    January 19, 2009

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    aw a wonderful take on the image promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • islekine
    January 18, 2009

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    Great take on the prompt!

    Best wishes in the contest...I would leave out the last line... Just me!
    Write on!

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