You danced into my life
with my heart wide open
I felt you dance right in
making me shiver at your touch
already I knew I loved you
too much
The days seems to fly by
you always on my mind
thinking one day you will be mine
so I waited patiently in love
smiling all the time
for you
The magic I feel from my love for you
kept me happy for days on end
but now that you have gone from me
where do I send this left over love
I wish not to waste it
this love is for you
I know you must think of me often
or why would I feel this way
I have never loved another this way
how can you take it all away
I love you and need you with me
please say yes
one more time
Not for me but for us
we are meant to be
my little beautiful princess
please dance back into my heart
take me away again with you
never to let me free
I love thee...
A contest entry
- Tell Her I Love Her by bluecollarlove.
7000 points, ended February 4, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Nicely written. The feel is very honest and true
. I loved your emotion! Love being so distant most certainly hurts, but luckily there is hope to one day be reunited.
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I especially loved the lines "but now that you have gone from me/where do I send this left over love" ! Beautiful! The longing and missing love feelings are just so touching. Well-done!
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Sounds as if you have been there.Thank You for sharing.
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No , I have not been there. I just went and read the two poems you suggested and this came to me. Your contest touched my heart, and so did you poems. Was fun imagining being so in love this way. Nice contest
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