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Your kiss is poetry

I would rather guess than know
Softly ask your kiss just how
Shouldn't you feel the same by now?

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  • dcostalis
    September 26, 2009
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    Yes


  • InterzoneTypewriter
    February 9, 2009

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    Suductive and solemn. Just long enough to capture a strong emotion, without giving it all away. Great to read. x


  • cycorythm
    January 21, 2009
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    After almost a year off of posting stuff....this one is pretty good!


  • WordsArentEnough
    January 19, 2009

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    Short, but I liked it. A nice introduction back into the world of poetry. I got the impression of a kind of calm questioning belying a serious want. Keep writing Amanda!


  • BellaAmare
    January 18, 2009
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    I loved the title. Nice and inquisitive.

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