I would rather guess than know
Softly ask your kiss just how
Shouldn't you feel the same by now?
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Suductive and solemn. Just long enough to capture a strong emotion, without giving it all away. Great to read.
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After almost a year off of posting stuff....this one is pretty good!

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Short, but I liked it. A nice introduction back into the world of poetry. I got the impression of a kind of calm questioning belying a serious want. Keep writing Amanda!


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I loved the title. Nice and inquisitive.


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