That night
You casted your spell on me
Your spell that ties my heart to yours
I never understood that
But now
As one year pasted
I see it clear
The moon shines on our meeting we had a year ago
It's not a spell
It's not a curse
All you did
Was a vow to love
For me to love you
And for you to love me
Let the stars tell our tale
Let our hearts sing a song
You teach me so much
Yet showed me so little
You shield me from fear
And replaced it with love
Sei mio amore
Ah, the warm night air is sinking in
The city lights are dazzling
The water is pretty with reflectiion
Seeing this with you
I love you so much
Let the night take us away
To somewhere we will stay
Hold me in your arms
Keeping us both warm
Want to get closer
When already reached the limit
Sei tutto per me
Just being here with you
Makes me happy
Kiss me
With your lovely lips
I want your kisses to keep me warm
Love your scent
Love your voice
Love your heart
Love your soul
Mio Amore
Love you dearly
I will be by your side
Together forever
Until time stand still
I'm your love
Se mio amore

And as for criticism I have none because everyone is great in their own respect just do what you must until you are happy with it. Sorry I couldnt be of more help.

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