MEOOOOOW!!
Crazy cat.
The owner thinks.
But what does the cat see?
MEOOOOOW!!
I am a lion,
king of the jungle
unstoppable,
top of the food chain,
surveying all who lay below me,
I am a lion.
HISSSSS!!
"Hush up psychokitty!"
The owner yells.
But what does the cat see?
HISSSSS!!
I am a snake,
slithering, slinking, sneaking
through the depths of the jungle,
feared for my cunning,
and my deadly bite,
I am a snake.
mew.
"Good kitty."
The owner says, giving his pet a scratch.
But what does the cat see?
mew.
I am an undercover agent,
acting, spying, gathering intelligence,
I will be stealthy and smart,
lulling him into a sense of security
and when the time comes
I can gain my place
on top of the world,
I am an undercover agent.
The owner will see what he wants to see.
But what does the cat see?
What does the cat see?
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This was cute! Thanks for entering and good luck
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A wonderful poem that was a pleasure to read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.
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This is an awesome poem. I bet cats do think like this. I wonder what my cat Sammy is thinking when he makes noise in his sleep. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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Sweetly delightful animal poem. The cat sees many things. Have them, love them. They totally fascinate with their actions.
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Delightful, oh to be in the mind of our cats sometimes, cute images.Well written. Blessings.
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this made me giggle. I love the way you got into the mind of the cat and made it imagine itself as so many different things. sweet and innocent. lovely.
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LOL you really got into the mind of the cat, and there was one verse here in particular that I could really picture a cat in, and it was;
"mew.
I am an undercover agent,
acting, spying, gathering intelligence,
I will be stealthy and smart,
lulling him into a sense of security
and when the time comes
I can gain my place
on top of the world,
I am an undercover agent."
Brilliant
That is SO typical of your normal housecat 
Really enjoyed reading this, even if it did make me miss my kitty back home - but ... so well written - great job!
thanks for entering
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Interesting read. I've often wondered what animals think he see. You're version was quite the catch. Thoroughly enjoyed!
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