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~~Snowy Wishing Well~~ (haiku)

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winter blue sky casts
shade over wishing well bucket
frozen ice glistens path

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  • kasper23
    January 20, 2009
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    very nice...


  • Brazos silver member
    January 19, 2009

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    Beatifully done, Blush. Write some more haikus, please? You are really doing quite well with them.

    Brazos


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 19, 2009
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    Nice haiku Sis, Good luck in the contest. hehe


  • Topaze
    January 19, 2009
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    Very nicely done, my best wishes.


  • doolie gold member
    January 19, 2009

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    Wow!!! Very nice haiku.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 19, 2009

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    aw a beutiful haiku and a delightful image good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Danna Hobart
    January 18, 2009
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    Looks like you worked it out, Susan. This is a beautiful haiku image.


  • Desire gold member
    January 18, 2009

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    Wow~

    See You are so good at Haikus and I just get drain bramage
    Excellent this is Beautiful!!
    Woot!!! Love how You penned this- and the images it provokes

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Sis
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • LunaSilverStars
    January 18, 2009

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    beautiful image added to the chosen picture, i do love how ice seems to glitter although i do hate the snow and cold...


  • Melodies
    January 18, 2009

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    Love haiku and think yours rocks wonderfully well. It's great to read winter poems when it's winter. All mood and smiles!

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 18, 2009

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    lovely picture

    along with the Ku, looks like winter took a hold big time! 14 degrees here and still dropping, hope its warmer there..lol
    good uck in the contest
    mm


  • Maxboy gold member
    January 18, 2009

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    A wonderful write which didn't need the picture to see it.

    Beautiful....Best wishes in the contest


  • Rclane
    January 18, 2009
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    Very nicely done and so appropriate the season. Best to you in contest.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    January 18, 2009

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    This is really beautiful. I can't do haiku, but you have captured it I see. Very nice and all the best of luck.


  • daviscth
    January 18, 2009

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    This is really pretty and the imagery is so well done. I like the picture and the BG is perfect for it. Good luck in the contest dear.


  • penman gold member
    January 18, 2009
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Love the background and great haiku. Best of luck in the contest.


  • wildflower. gold member
    January 18, 2009

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    Ooh felt like i was in winter *shivers*
    Bravo! I love this wintery piece! Best of luck to you in the contest

    ♥ Kathraina

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