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My Poor Heart

Oh, my poor empty heart.
How it pained when we finally did part.
Though my love never went away,
and my feelings never did stray.

Oh, how it saddens me much,
That never again I'll feel your touch.
And so soon the thought of you
will be replaced with those of new.

Maybe we'll see each other again,
But who knows what will happen then.
Shall we rejoice and smile?
Or think the other is vile?

Though one thing remains true
Is the love I felt for you.
There is nothing more to say
But maybe there will be someday.

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  • demon.known
    May 21

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    This is really good. That second stanza
    "Oh, how it saddens me much,
    That never again I'll feel your touch.
    And so soon the thought of you
    will be replaced with those of new."
    Made my heart melt, which it takes a lot to do!