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Dora Delilah Rasberry

i can believe in all

you've told me

but then i was

afraid to show you

lots to say

my words are

swollen

crossed into

your deep blue sea

and falling down

too many times

i get what you mean

 i can feel you

i can feel you

i can love

 you

or what were you

right before this day

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song (Delilah Rasberry)
www.myspace.com/seandogsean

 

Inspired by my cat   DDR   Dora Delilah Rasberry

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  • Beverlynohime
    May 15
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    Interesting write. ^-^

  • EncounteredEpiphany
    April 4

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    Bravo

    Very deep, I can feel you pouring your soul into an eloquent piece of art!!! Very soothing and reflective Loamo "Chin Chin" Chente Anni Salute Cia


  • Crea
    March 30
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    i like!!

    I like the flow....totally love'n the song!! I like yes(that's you) also..well done zappa!!