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Keep Coming Back

I try to leave
Shed this weight
Run away

But it keeps coming back,
stalking me like a monster
I bask in it's warmth,
for I love it too much

I have to surrender,
but I can't
knowing my consequences

Let me try to forget

Bury it deep inside
Ignore it

Now I know...

It Keeps Coming Back.
Stronger
Needier
Than before.

No.

I won't

I can't

But it keeps coming back.

Author notes

Okay this was actually going to be 2 different poems. But then they were both bad and incomplete, so I combined them to one poem! YAY

Yup

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  • checkmate-
    January 22

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    Yay! Good job! This is an awesome poem. What were the other two poems?

    Anyways, good job

    -Paradox


  • Tqop
    January 18
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    Beautiful. I absolutely loved it. I was fun, and cool.

  • AJishere
    January 18

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    KT! I like this poem. It is VERY good. YES, VERY, VERY, VERY, GOOD!

    From AJ