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This Day. [-Carl-]

This day's to expose what's true
Underneath the sun and moon
Through the stars and black
This comet's going to fall soon

When comes night
I'd like you to take a walk
Show you what this world's got
Write upon the board with chalk

Whatever your future
Whatever's in store
I'll have your back
Forever and more

When the dying days come
The memories will show
The things you'll learn
That by then you'll know

Tomorrow is another path
Which the right one you'll take
Cause at the end I'll be there
To give you a piece of cake

Ehh...

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  • CharleeBoy
    January 18

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    Lol, nice last line. This sort of reminds me of a Dr. Seues poem, but in a good way. It was very creative and catchy. Well done, keep it up :]]


  • Back to Sophie
    January 18

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    My dearest Earl,

    you are indeed absolutely amazing and great. You are one of my greatestestest friends and I love you very much. Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem for me, and I will take that cake any day.


    • Peanut Butter.
      January 18
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      Lol, love, same goes for you on the greatest friends. You make me smile and few can do that. I love you too and anytime I'd write a poem for you.