She hates when
friends are in
a big fight
Everyone going at
each other's throats
over something stupid
Why is it
that people just
can't get along?
Torn between two
friends you care
for isn't fun
If they care
don't put her
in the middle
Is the madness
ever going to
have an end?
THIS answer is
quite simple, for
it's a NO
She says nothing
because they'd be
mad at her
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"Thoughts to ponder on indeedy. We all have to deal with this at some point in our lives...sometimes more than once. I wish people would get along..but I guess it's the human condition that makes for unrest. I would tell your friends that you won't take sides because it's not your... or anyone else's ...place to judge others." I agree.
Thank-you for putting this piece into my contest. And good luck.
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this poem really makes you think.. people always are put in this situation, and its not always a clear cut case on one person being right or wrong, and it always sucks for the person in the middle.
thankyou for entering my contest and good luck :-)
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Thoughts to ponder on indeedy. We all have to deal with this at some point in our lives...sometimes more than once. I wish people would get along..but I guess it's the human condition that makes for unrest. I would tell your friends that you won't take sides because it's not your... or anyone else's ...place to judge others.
Mariana
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wow, you sure are in a difficult position. Not a nice place to be.. so im not suprised you are angry and frustrated.
It takes a lot to stick up for someone when you risk your own friendships and reputation so your a very good person to do that.
I really get what you mean about the fact that you shouldnt be put in the middle of 2 people you care about.
This is a brilliant write. The flow is brilliant and your word choice is great.
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
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Nice poem. I know how you feel. I hate that situation and have been it it many times. Usually I say nothing and try to ignore it. Otherwise I try to avoid it completely.
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