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Baring My Soul

My heart is a dying rose
withered and dry

for you've drifted away from me
like a depleted brook

no longer cooling my desire
in the heat of the day

My roots secrete the dust of exhaustion
being overwhelmed by the sorrows
of brokenness

for you came to me as a flower
effervescent with the scent of love
and beguiled me

Now I wander in the loneliness
of endless yearning

praying you'd have mercy upon
my wounded soul

for I need you as living things
need air to breath and water
to drink

I bid you be mine once more
for I am nothing without you

we are meant to be my love
twin as wed forever,

for you are my earth, wind
and utmost desire

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  • theredcatjazzoflove
    January 24, 2009

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    very nice here Mr Howard i think you told her you love her very well good luck to you hon in the contest

    tha baddest


  • liltulip gold member
    January 19, 2009
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    this is beautiful

    good luck!!

  • bluecollarlove
    January 18, 2009
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    Damn

    Maybe I do have a chance. I think you are of my heart. This is really what I wanted.