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Its your stupid fault that you're gone
You know that right?
Obviously not, your dead.
Gone.
Six feet under.

How much damage could it do?
I bet thats what you were thinking,
"it's only a little booze"
right?
"I just want to lose a few more..."
Stone?


You never hurt anyone but yourself.


Yet in hurting yourself,
You ripped my life apart.

I might forgive you one day.

Mum

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  • Deaths Prayer
    September 9
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    Sorry this not dark atall

  • FallingRainDrop
    February 26

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    aw hun this is so sad. but really good! i hope that someday you can forgive your mom even if its hard. nice write! :]


  • ListeningToSilence
    February 4
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    Deep. your anger is undeniable. thank you so much for sharing lovely write. xx
    --meggen


  • RedAquarius
    January 26

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    Abuse is such a foul thing - for all involved. I can feel the love and hurt here - very strongly done.

  • starving-to-survive
    January 26

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    Wow, erm i am so so sorry. I dont even know what to say. THis was a very difficult and emotional poem for me to read because i am reading it from a different point of view. I suffer from anorexia and drink daily along with a lot of other issues. So to read how it can affect someone, wat it does to teh person and to family around is a very difficult thing for me.
    Thank you so much for entering this into my contest. I am so sorry that you ahve had to endure such pain. my heart goes out to you

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