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Lonely

She sits alone
tears falling down her face
wishing he was here
for her to embrace

She stares at the sky
completely filled with stars
she's asking herself why
her wrists are filled with scars

She see's a falling star
so she makes a wish
wondering where you are
in the sea, there are many fish

But who wants a fish?
this is what she thinks
after she makes her wish
the wind in her eyes, she sudenly blinks

As her eyes re-open
she see's her one and only
and then she says out loud
baby, now i'm not so lonely

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  • Faded Existence
    January 25
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    awww this was so sweet! Thanks so much for your entry and good luck in the contest!!

    -Faded