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If they can do it I can too

I don't know
It's all so crazy
And my hearts about to burst
From everything I'm feeling

Oh no
Oh yes

I don't know where to go
Cause you're not hear holding me close
To the edge like you always do
Right now all I think about it you

Oh no
Oh yes

I'm so scared and
I just need to know that you are too
that I'm not alone in being so ridiculus
Cause of the way I feel

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  • phillyhottpockets
    January 18
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    you know youre never alone, ill always be here for you


  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    January 18

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    *here
    *ridiculous
    good a usual


    ohh btw on the poster u made me....i really thot u did it w/no spelling mistakes. u spelled little wrong, i looked at it again last nite and i see "litte" *sighs* <3