Whispered breaths sigh~
exhale northern chill~
falling timber collides~
A contest entry
- True Haiku by Odd Thomas.
650 points, ended February 8, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great!!!
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I love haiku and this is really beautiful.
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Excellent haiku, such force in so few words.
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really like how this poem carries... from the first line to the last, from a 'sigh' to 'collides' -- marvelous. Love,
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You don't have to do long pieces to produce such imagery as is within this piece. This is brilliant writing here, and the imagery is very vivid. Well done Maralisa. Good luck in the contest.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Vivid pictures and feelings come across here.
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so simple yet so powerful, i love the abrupt ending.
great stuff here
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I love it!!
The background is beautiful!! I'm not sure if I've seen this Ku of yours yet, but it's great!! I love Haiku the most, I think. It's so refreshing, no matter what the subject. Thank you for sharing your muse's talents with all of us!! 
Peace & hugs, xx Cyn xx 
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i like it, The titel suits it so
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wow so much entincity in so few words nice job keep it up....
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This is a great Haiku,wonderfully written indeed.
Be blessed in all you ever do.
Tony
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wonderful haiku!
this is beautiful, thank you for sharing it with us!
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I wish I knew how to write haiku, maybe I need some lessons from you. This had a beautiful moment in the end. Perfect for this contest. Best to you
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you go girl, you are doing real well with this form of writting. all the best in the contest.
Angel-anne
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Picture perfect! nicely done. good luck in the contest.
Shaz xx
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Wow a brilliant haiku hun
Your words say it all .. perfectly
Good luck in the contest
Julie
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A lovely piece, my best wishes.
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Wow~
You go girly You gone Haiku
Woot!!!! I try them but get drain bramage
Wowzers~
Excellent this is
Love the words: northern chill
such imagery
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Excellent write
Wow this is exceptional work here
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wow, amazing haiku you have penned! lovely job and good luck
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Wonderful
very well done. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest
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This is such a beautiful haiku poem. I love the imagery. Good luck with this, it's great.
I wish I could write these but i suck at counting syllables. I think I wrote one before but it was by accident.
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