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Once Upon A Time.(Triolet)

Once upon a time
Not so long ago
Wedding  bells did chime, hearts were in rhyme
Once upon a time
Yes our life was sublime
Why is it no longer so
Once upon a time
Not so long ago

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  • Parearoo
    January 18

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    Hard to beat

    Very nicely written, Billbard. Kinda sad to look back on something that was once so perfect.
    Good luck in your contest; you're going to be a tough one to beat. :-)


  • AbidoodleCullen
    January 18
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    Thank you for entering and good luck!
    <3 Abi