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Oh, My Hair!

Oh, my hair!
Let me share

Envy-
that translucent snake
will strip all color from
your crown, yes-
your hair

Survival of the fittest
-whom can and will
adapt to change-
sees through this serpents diffussed light
the rainbows which lie beyond-
treasures to be found
even in the smallest of things

Confidence forms the diadem
upon such a trover where embeds
the matrix of love-
beholden a warrior
a hero

Be it love
Be it envy
"No man can serve two Masters"

Oh, my hair!
Choose wisely









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  • Danna Hobart
    January 26, 2009
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    This had me rolling on the floor! How funny! Thank you for entering my contest.


    • Mary O gold member
      January 26, 2009
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      You're welcome and thank you, Donna.
      ~Mary O