Spiritual entity
in human shape
trying to give...
...more than I take
Sending soul
through eternal light
keeping darkness
out of sight.
When I finally
reach Nirvan's
gate,
I'll know it was
worth the wait.
Author notes
My Junoon, passion,
is finding the answer to how
to become one with the Universe...
re-create my
spirit, so it becomes part of the all.
Reaching the higher plain.
A contest entry
- The last stage of any madness, thinkings, feelings, words and more and more by The.poet.of.hearts.
1665 points, ended February 5, 2009, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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My Junoon
Theme 7.00
Idea 6.20
Emotions 6.20
Feelings 6.30
Words 5.80
Background 6.40
Title 6.50
Passion 6.50
Interest 6.60
Showing the Junoon 6.70
64.20
though, it looked incomplete, disturbed, and hidden. I liked the word and thoughts alot, after all it's the features of pre Junoon, and passion. you had crossed the barrier of madness i think YES
you tried well to do justice with your work, I appreciate
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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Excellent
What a great creation. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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I like your wording, images and the depth to this. Well done!
best wishes in your contest
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