Three
visions
twisted,
indebted,
forgotten.
Yellow
letters
craftly
hidden.
Waiting
raindrops
trap
dust.
Handprints,
legacy.
Solitude.
Karma.
Equality.
Immobilised
compassion
reveals...
truth.
Journey.
Don't
judge
Believe.
A contest entry
- Worth 1000 Words... Choose 26. by KyleBerg.
700 points, ended January 26, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
"Fallen From Grace" -- by mY.lifE.iN.lyricS...It may seem like a list but look CLOSER....it is a poem for those who dont wear blinkers!
Comments
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Wonderful. A bit difficult to understand at first, but powerful words and a deep meaning here.
Thanks for entering Jane
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No probs..thks for the comment...and my writes are any thing but simple to read hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
just kidding!
Jane
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Hmmmmm this is a coolieo poem
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Coolieo? Lol I will take that as a plus..thanks for taking the time Dude.
Jane -
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Well D()()D!! It is! AMG I love it :]
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This is just beautiful. Even without sentences to add clarity, the meaning stands firm. It took me a couple of reads for this to really sink in, but when it clicked, I fell in love with it. This has to be one of your best.
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Thanks for your lovely comment.This one crept up on me one night and I could'nt but pen it down before it escaped me.
Jane
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To believe
And to be chaste of heart. Mans common ground on the road to impossibilties dear poet.
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Impossibilities...mmm my favourite,well.....deed well thought.
Ta Bob.
Jane
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