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The Haunted

My sins plague me
Swallowing my entirety
Emptiness my best friend

Anger and jealously control me

 

A ghost of the past

Angelic, pure

Smiling face contorted

A shallow grin

 

I ran as fast as I could

Hoping to evade what has come to pass

She blinded me with pain

Yelled at my forgotten crimes

 

I've wronged so many

My time has come

Tears of loneliness linger with

Cherished memories

 

I promise to visit

In dreams and pictures

Never forget me

Keep me in your heart


Always

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  • Poems4thesoul
    February 16

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    this is veyr special
    it had its own special meaning
    and i am glad that u thought this
    it moved me deeply. my poems are noce also
    if u wanted....visit my page

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 23
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    Mysteriously written and deeply imaged.
    I enjoyed this; thanks for entering.
    Good luck.
    Brian


  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    January 18
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    thank you for adding a reserve. :] best wishes in contestt