This is the last dime.
Baby, this truly will be the last time
that I...
say to myself that you don't love me.
I shall believe.
I shall love you more and more and more and more
and more
than I have before.
Don't think I'm a fool
for loving you this way.
I've been loving you since we met that day.
It was a year ago, and it was dark and getting late.
I looked at you knowing you were my soul mate.
I'm so insecure.
But my thoughts are pure.
I promise you:
This is the last dime.
Baby, this truly will be the last time
that I...
say to myself that you don't love me.
Author notes
This was a true poem (revised) about how I will try not to be insecure, and will trust that my (now ex-boyfriend) loves me.
A contest entry
- The last stage of any madness, thinkings, feelings, words and more and more by The.poet.of.hearts.
1665 points, ended February 5, 20 entries
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Idea=5.5
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Feelings=6.0
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the wordings were not highly polished, but the thought were true, and nice. you did well, but still it seemed incomplete, like some one speaking a lot, but actually not telling a lot
thanks entering into the contest
Wish you all the best
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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