Body, heart and soul
aches for him
but I can't have him.
Instead, I lay with another
hoping to come to terms
my pain is seeping through.
Hold, kiss, breathe
in his love for me
had I only known.
My heart aches for another
Yet my hands are tied
in matrimony.
To death till us part
I fear it may be true
My heart, pleads forgiveness.
Author notes
Number 1. Have you ever been in love with or liked someone who is taken?
The only difference is, He is not taken, and I am.
A contest entry
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aww i love it great wirte i can feel the love in this piec great job amazing wirte keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day
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Aaaaw. I love you, babe! Well done!
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very good
loved the pain and passion
the truth
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I reallly like this.
I love the last stanza:
..+To death till us part
I fear it may be true
My heart, pleads forgiveness.
Maybe you can love 2people at the same time.
Brilliant write with loads of emotion, thanks for entering and good luck
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Matters Not
Point remains...it could not be. **hoping to come to terms** Emotional and thought provoking write.
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