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Distorted or Otherwise...xXx

I am sitting in a dark casino,
No drinks are being had,
Gambling my life away,
I hold the cards of life,
Luck has been my friend,
But eventually I will be dealt a bad hand,
One that will send me falling to the ground,
A harsh dose of reality,
You cannot always win,
You may not glide through life without falling on your pride,
You must be trained,
Little trips will prepare you for the plunge,
Plunge into reality my dearest friend,
You drunken moron you cannot spend life floating on your alcoholic cloud,
You must shed your jaded wings and fall,
Splat on the ground and live,
You may not stumble to your ultimate demise,
You must stumble to reality,
Distorted or otherwise,
I shall trip and fall and stumble until I reach reality,
For living in a dream does not allow you to learn,
Learn basic life skills and simple commands of the unperfected world,
Trip and fall then stand up tall again,
For you may not always float on the cloud of drunken perfection,
You must plunge into reality,
Distorted or otherwise...

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