Spring winds caress my
soul
the warming touch consumes me
whole
and when icy chills harness
me
springs call will set me
free
Author notes
For a contest. Awesome new form.
my idea 'Icy cold winters that melt into spring' - The sound of music
A contest entry
- New Style Title " Edsque" by wingsofgold25.
1000 points, ended May 21, 2009, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Warmly whispering velvety verses.
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why not..? indeed it is..and one can have the bliss..yo uare lucky that way..and we are lucky this way that we shared your wonderful poetry..well done..
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Excellent poem. It really does give a warm feeling in the soul. Excellent write.
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A very simple and effective poem - well done!
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Wow, I love the simplicity and beauty of this piece. Well done!
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Springtime.
A beautiful picture you have painted here of one of my favorite time of the year tried to pick out a favorite line but they were all equaly good.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest
ED.
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