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Frankenstein!

Frankenstein a monster?
no Ive never heard,
Frankensteins my best Friend,
hes not scary hes scared,

Frankenstein a robot?
no Ive never thought,
Frankenstein is human,
he eats food and plays sport,

Frankenstein gives nightmares?
no Ive never had a dream
of Frankenstein in it,
and i wouldn't scream,

Frankenstein is huge?
never have i seen,
Frankenstein is a feather,
and is never ever mean,

you're probably thinking,
then who am i,
and what of Frankenstein do i see,
but i tell you a secret ,
Frankenstein is me.

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A contest entry

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Comments

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  • RedAquarius
    January 27
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    Cute. Ol' Franky is multi-faceted, just like all of us.


  • Erozay
    January 26
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    i just have one word for this and its a comment

    ~Wierd~


  • AbidoodleCullen
    January 25
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    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    <3 Abi


  • Umi Juvariel
    January 21

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    This was fun in a cute way. It has been a while since I have read something like this, and I enjoyed every line. Excellent work and good luck in my contest.


  • faded dreams
    January 20

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    oh very cute, I like that. I wouldn't have though to approach it from that perspective. Best luck in my contest


  • cupcakealia
    January 20
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    Brilliant!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 18

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    Nice job, Lana. Your writing is becoming more and more elaborate, I think. Keep up the good work.
    Brian

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